Forevermore, Poem by Helena Alvarez

Forevermore,

Rating: 5.0


my vision is fuzzed
my senses have failed
my ghost is walking
on this rocky trail

a phantom in this world
oblivious to all
this is not a game
i never felt so small

the trail im walking is way to long
i need somewhere to hide
i need your help
i need your love
i need to feel inside

slowly i wander
into the misty winder night
i feel you grab my hand
'i promise to hold on tight'

Monday, September 21, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: senses
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kesav Easwaran 22 September 2009

mystically romantic...going through this poem the reader feels the anxiety and the comfort it provides...good work Helena...thanks...10

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