Forgive Comments

Well said! A very nice work....5 stars.

And when time sieves once again, forgive becomes GIVE!

** sieve siv/ noun 1. a utensil consisting of a wire or plastic mesh held in a frame, used for straining solids from liquids, for separating coarser from finer particles, or for reducing soft solids to a pulp. synonyms: strainer, sifter, filter, riddle, screen it goes to MyPoemList and MARCH 2018's showcase. bri :)

i ask for forgiveness when my mate says: Bri, get OUT! ! ! And NEVER COME BACK! ! ! I like the poem. it makes sense. chess for dummies? i'd probably fail at that also. you have just enough rhyming to make the poem fun. forgive/sieve** is wonderful. (to be continued) .....