The form of Chess
in which silly mistakes
are taken back to improve the game
and can be used as excuse for loss,
that form needs another name.
Forgiveness Chess, I suggest.
As Time will, Time will sieve
and I will ask, 'Tonight,
shall we play Forgive? '
** sieve siv/ noun 1. a utensil consisting of a wire or plastic mesh held in a frame, used for straining solids from liquids, for separating coarser from finer particles, or for reducing soft solids to a pulp. synonyms: strainer, sifter, filter, riddle, screen it goes to MyPoemList and MARCH 2018's showcase. bri :)
i ask for forgiveness when my mate says: Bri, get OUT! ! ! And NEVER COME BACK! ! ! I like the poem. it makes sense. chess for dummies? i'd probably fail at that also. you have just enough rhyming to make the poem fun. forgive/sieve** is wonderful. (to be continued) .....
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Well said! A very nice work....5 stars.