Forgiven Poem by tony atkins

Forgiven



i forgive u baby
even thow it was wrong
i cant lose u know
even thoght im strong

what u did is killing u
when it should be killing me
i know ur sorry i know u payed a price
but i forgave u so u should be abel to sleep at night

what u dont know is ill never forgive him
i want to kill him
he used u like most guys do so
i will save u from a shame like this

but in return i whant just one thing u to promes that ull be true
that ull never whander agen and let me harm him the best i can

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Red Blooded Black Hearted 16 September 2007

Emotionful and yet forgiving... Great work.

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Linda Weischedel 26 August 2007

Amazing write Tony. You said it straight up as to how you feel in general. Good job! Always, Linda

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