Dustin Burel

Rookie (Jan 8,1994 / Macon, Georgia)

Forgiven - Poem by Dustin Burel

Wounded by one’s kiss,
And broken by one’s lie,
A worry of what I’ll miss,
I fear of not being that guy,

I wish to heal those wings…
And push away all these things
And cut away those strings,
To stop all stress that clings…

I can forgive, I can forget, here my heart will stay,
No amount of sin you’ve done can make me turn away,

Let me be your taker,
Place your trust in me,
I know you may be hesitant,
But you’ll see what we could be…


Comments about Forgiven by Dustin Burel

  • (5/11/2011 8:33:00 AM)


    Nice poem. Rich in depth and imagery.
    Beautifully conceived. I rate it 10.
    Thanks for sharing.....
    Please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2.
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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, May 11, 2011

Poem Edited: Wednesday, May 11, 2011


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