Sunday, January 14, 2018

Forgotten Man Comments

Rating: 5.0

A forgotten man
On enlightened sands
Breached by the winds
That stun his soul
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Kevin Lomax
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Sandra Mocem 22 November 2018

I love it

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Jazib Kamalvi 15 January 2018

A good start with a nice poem, Kevin. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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Chinedu Dike 14 January 2018

An insightful piece of poetry well twisted in poetic diction with conviction. Beautiful rendition of words nicely brought forth. Thanks for sharing Kelvin.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 14 January 2018

Nice poem....10 With bare hands Despite having known about the cycle and life's theory We go on collecting ill gotten money When time comes to enjoy We go bare handed to heavenly journey

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