Forsaken Poem by Carike Klokow

Forsaken



Broken torn split in two
not really knowing what to do
with your scent left in my bed
and my heart as heavy as led

Projecting your face over again
my mind and body taking strain
your touch, your smile, your eyes
your back, my door, my lies!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Brian Dorn 11 July 2006

Carike, a powerful write... I especially liked the ending! Very well done! ! Brian

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