green spring
full of colours
warm
refreshing showers,
daffodils
roses, tulips bloom
which he picked
to fill my room
hot summer shining sun
time to splash
and have fun
burned skins, sweat all over
eating ice-cream
to get sober,
the soft sand
beneath our feet
we shared a creamy kiss
golden autumn days
hand-in-hand
at the park
children run and cry
dark winter
rainy days
lightning
hitting the sky,
rosy cheeks
freezy nose
curled in quilts
and wear coats
we stay inside
near the fire
to cuddle
and warm each other.
saturday,
april 04th
2009 c
Loved this poem. Full of life. Love poems written about creation.
it seems a fair and deep love..the idea of poem is good and impressive and heart feeling
nice and different way to talk about the four seasons and it talks about the things that pple look forward to every season.... love it 10 with no doubt
Only three poems, but all of them amazingly beautiful and sweet symphony to the mind. This is my favourite though.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Hello Brenda - I can't believe I'm the first to comment on this lovely peom. I love poems about the Seasons they are so so evocative. Always start with SRING it is a reawakening of life and love. I would willingly fill your room with flowers. The lazy hazy days of SUMMER. Fun - perspiration - ice cream (to get sober or colder? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?) - sand - bare feet - careless creamy kisses. My Brother lives in Mexico (Puebla) and every day is Summer - no wonder they have a population problem! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! AUTUMN - technicolour leaves - cooling - drooling - hand and hand in the park. WINTER - heralded by Autumn and eclipsed by Spring - but an excuse for mulled wine - Christmas Fare and cuddles by the fire - ah yes I remember it well! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Every season is my favorite - right now it's Spring - what about you Brenda - do you have a favorite? ? ? Thanks for sharing - a perfect poem - by a perfect poetess. Love through Poetry - JOHN.