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Rating: 5.0

dark is pregnant with day
as it dawns
Mother gets frail and feeble
and Baby light wails for life

Sunday, December 27, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: nature
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unwritten Soul 27 December 2015

Short but it growing in mind to be longer thought...its beautiful work Hiroshi, So arigato to u

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Hiroshi Satow 17 February 2016

Thank you for your comment, Unwritten Soul. Arigato to you, too.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 27 December 2015

Beautiful short, sweet and meaningful poem which is thought provoking and intriguing too. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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Hiroshi Satow 17 February 2016

Thank you for your comment, Ratnakar Mandlik. Sometimes I found it more exciting to write shorter poems than longer ones.

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