Fragments Poem by Stefanie Fontker

Fragments

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Fragmented thoughts-
Leave behind too many
Holes in my skin.
The last moment I held,
Caressing your ashes
In the burning house
Flickers and flutters
Like our heavy hearts
Once did when we lived.

Tuesday, September 27, 2011
Topic(s) of this poem: ashes
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Malaya Roses 28 September 2011

Memories were beautifully crafted in this poem. Solid words from hearts! ! ! Excellent! ! !

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Eric Cockrell 27 September 2011

strong, powerful, and precise... well done!

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