Free Poem by RushelleLyn LombardiOrton

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Rating: 5.0


You pushed me too far
Now you will regret it.
I hit the bar,
And fell a little bit.

To my death,
I was happy.
I wished this before my last breath.
I have been so droopy.

I was happy to have death upon me.
I did not want to flee.
As I felt free.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
*Trusting You* 26 December 2008

this is written in a much more mature way then the others I have read... along with the others I enjoyed reading this once again. good job. Becca

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Autumn Stoddard 25 December 2008

A good read, though I do hope you will feel freedom before you do the grasp of death.

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