Wednesday, October 25, 2017

Freedom Comments

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The boy stood in the field
His freedom did not yield
For now - in this moment
He was free
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Pieter van Wyk
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Kumarmani Mahakul 25 October 2017

Freedom did not yield and this provoked thought. Then the rain came pouring down and tears. Sun kisses the Earth softly. This beautiful memory is definitely interesting. An amazing poem is nicely penned...10

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Pieter Van Wyk 25 October 2017

Thank you very much!

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