Aryan Nuwal

Freshman - 840 Points (19: 08: 2007 / Ajmer)

Freedom - Poem by Aryan Nuwal

Freedom

They were the last days,

the days of the british kingdom,

only because of some great Indian people,

today we have got FREEDOM.



They were the days,

the days of the cruel and dishonestrulers,

who asked us to pay the higher taxes,

they were a big problem

handed over to our motherland,

but we kind ones

had granted them with great honours,

but this was not enough.



They torchered us as slaves,

and hurted our trust on them, as

they killed our own brothers,

and made fights amongst us.



This made some people amongst us,

to come forward to swear,

to remove this dirt,

from our motherlands body,

this was the dare, chosen by us



some people used the ways of violence,

to stop the disused powers of the cruel,

but some like gandhiji

made their own steps of non-violence,

against their raid.



Thanks to some great people,

who sacrificed their lives,

without thinking of anyone,

these were the son of our motherland,

who risked their lives for her,

without caring of their brothers and sister

Topic(s) of this poem: bravery, courage, indian, love, nationality, trust


Comments about Freedom by Aryan Nuwal

  • (4/27/2018 9:47:00 AM)

    Superb Truly gives a feeling of patriotism (Report)Reply

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  • (4/22/2018 6:31:00 AM)

    has the strength connected with literacy (Report)Reply

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  • Jazib Kamalvi (4/22/2018 5:19:00 AM)

    Write comment. A good start, Aryan. Read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks (Report)Reply

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  • (4/20/2018 10:06:00 AM)

    Very nice Aryan....very nice imagination... (Report)Reply

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  • (4/8/2018 3:46:00 AM)

    Amazing Nice attempt at this age .. keep it up talented boy (Report)Reply

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  • (4/8/2018 3:32:00 AM)

    Excellent work.. keep it up (Report)Reply

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  • (4/8/2018 12:30:00 AM)

    Superb (Report)Reply

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  • (4/7/2018 11:32:00 PM)

    Excellent Aryan.Keep it up. (Report)Reply

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  • (4/7/2018 11:22:00 PM)

    Very nice keep it up (Report)Reply

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  • (4/7/2018 10:55:00 PM)

    Appreciable effort Liked (Report)Reply

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  • (4/7/2018 10:50:00 PM)

    You look like a young poet (Report)Reply

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  • (4/7/2018 9:56:00 PM)

    freedom of courageous attempts to rescue fallen right....nice (Report)Reply

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  • (4/7/2018 9:42:00 PM)

    Thanks dear Admin for letting trolls in. They will murder POO OF THE DAY until you come to your senses. Already ReportedReply

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  • (4/7/2018 9:39:00 PM)

    Everyone who has commented deserves a medal.

    Disaffected Admin
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  • (4/7/2018 7:55:00 PM)

    in a few more attempts. Keep up your good work budding writer .... Cheers (Report)Reply

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  • (4/7/2018 7:54:00 PM)

    A Good Attempt by a 10 year old kid.... Continue your work Aryan, surely your skills will be hone (Report)Reply

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  • (4/7/2018 1:13:00 PM)

    Spare him people. This looks like a budding writer.. his other poems are on Mom Dad (Report)Reply

    (4/8/2018 1:57:00 PM)

    Thanks for understanding my feelings.....
    Just a 10 yr kid: (

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  • (4/7/2018 11:19:00 AM)

    This is no proper to treat writer in such manner. I agree with criticism. Not very good poem. But this is more on PH than it is on writer. (Report)Reply

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  • Kumarmani Mahakul (4/7/2018 10:46:00 AM)

    They are the great to bring freedom by cleanig the violence and brutality. Beautiful expression has been made. Thanks and congratulations for being selected this poem as the poem of the day. (Report)Reply

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  • (4/7/2018 5:17:00 AM)

    This is a letter, not poetry. (Report)Reply

    (4/7/2018 7:23:00 AM)

    A letter without an envelope.

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, March 25, 2018

Poem Edited: Thursday, December 6, 2018


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