Freedom Poem by Victor Wilson

Freedom

Rating: 5.0


Indeed the essence of the world is unpredictable
I ran from serfdom to discover the path of manumission
But this path is more of a real servitude
I'm like a caged bird whose heart has been eaten out

Life, I'm waiting for my demise
But it seems life is not done operating on me
Should I annihilate myself so it will be suicide and I'll be free?
Thinking is already like a knife piercing my chest
Penetrating into my heart

If my animatness is not ready to give me emancipation,
Then I'll go to the sky which is boundless
And draw down a little piece of liberation
And if the sky can't, I will go to the netherworld
To get my prerogative

If I can't get my freedom, I will wait
For my necrosis to give me my entitlement
But until then, I'll hold on to my rage
And let it fuel my fight for a different stage

In this darkness, I'll find my light
A spark that burns, a beacon in the night
I'll rise up, I'll claim my right
To live, to breathe, to be free from this plight

Saturday, July 26, 2025
Topic(s) of this poem: suicide
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This poem was born out of a deep confrontation with inner turmoil, the search for meaning, and the overwhelming weight of feeling trapped — emotionally, spiritually, and existentially. It explores the paradox of seeking liberation in a world that often feels like a cage, and the painful process of holding on to hope in the face of despair. Through vivid symbolism and raw confession, it navigates the darkest corridors of thought to find a flicker of resilience — the will to rise, to fight, and to reclaim the self. It is a reflection of the soul's rebellion against silence.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kevin Patrick II 06 December 2025

I've read this poem several times when I come on the site, and I always find new interpretations when I read this, overall though I see it as you do, the paradox of our need for freedom but conditioned to a social contract that keeps us trapped. This poem is wisdom

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Richard Wlodarski 16 November 2025

A profound, heart-wrenching poem that so brilliantly captures the very essence of what is so very well expressed in your Poet's Notes. I feel your pain and suffering, Victor. And like me, you have used poetry as a cathartic release. Keep up the great work, Victor!

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