Freedom-From Dark! Poem by Partha Pratim Goswami

Freedom-From Dark!

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When dark becomes darker
Hovering awaits longer
Thirst gets scorched without quench
And claim abates in a trance.

Then the earth cries
And the creativity dies,
All buds are ravaged
Blooming flowers turn faded.

Hypocrisy starts to reign
Aloofness plunges into vein,
The heart spurts terribly
And the blood splatters unflinchingly.

To reverberate the horror
To remind all the error
Of ignorance, reluctance and silence-

That took away all the rights
Deferring the emancipation
To ceaseless nights.

Freedom-From Dark!
Sunday, August 7, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: freedom,independence day
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Freedom means freeness from not only the suppression by unwanted government but also from anti nationalist people.Unity and awareness is very necessary to keep freedom going.
The poem shows such things and some other ironically
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ajay Kumar Adarsh 26 August 2016

nice poem............. I memories the line which we learn in our school- Tamso Maa Sad Gamay.........(in Shanskrit) : ? ? remember? ? .)) : you have done a interesting work....I'm not saying...your poem shows...thanks Partha....your poetry skill is very good..best of luck Dear.

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Thank you for bringing the analogy but I think it was as follows Asato ma sat gamaya tamaso ma jyotir gamaya mrityur ma amritang gamaya Meaning as usual you know.

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Gandalf The Grey 08 August 2016

Happy independence day Partha

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Augustus Billy Mutebesi 07 August 2016

Hehee... this poem is interesting. Thanks a lot for sharing.

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you're most welcome

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