Just A Move Poem by Partha Pratim Goswami

Just A Move

Rating: 4.0


It is just a move
From the extreme dark
To twinkling light;

It is just a move
From the fear and hatred
To a world of life;

It is just a move
From all negativity
To an optimistic cheer;

It is just a move
From the blood smeared cloth
To a spotless one
White, bright and smooth
Pouring joy and peace;

It is just a move
From anger and agony
To pleasure and satisfaction;

It is just a move
From the brainstorming pain
Of neglect and ignorance
To a handful of
Care and courtesy;

It is just a move
From the feeling of conquer
To that of independence;

The move is fantastic
Hopeful and clear;
But the person behind
Is now illegible………..
Just a mirage
An incomplete thirst.

Saturday, August 6, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: love and life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Sometimes life becomes a flow and we want to just dive in it.But time and fate compels us to regret-for what? we don't even know.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ajay Kumar Adarsh 26 August 2016

very very beautiful line of your poem which I really like from deep of my heart..... It is just a move From the blood smeared cloth To a spotless one White, bright and smooth Pouring joy and peace; you really write awesome poem Partha....... bahut hi behatareen poem........aapke poem men jabardast message hota hai Goswami g..........meri subhkamnaye aapke sath hai....ummid hai aapki agali kavita(next poem) jald hi padhne ko milegi......thanks a lot.......GOD bless you my friend.....

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Ajay Kumar Adarsh 24 August 2016

nice poem with nice message.......great! 10+++

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Great response from you, Thank you for reading the poem carefully

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Gandalf The Grey 06 August 2016

A touching contrast of fortune and the opposite

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