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Just A Move

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It is just a move
From the extreme dark
To twinkling light;

It is just a move
From the fear and hatred
To a world of life;

It is just a move
From all negativity
To an optimistic cheer;
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Saturday, August 6, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: love and life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Sometimes life becomes a flow and we want to just dive in it.But time and fate compels us to regret-for what? we don't even know.
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COMMENTS
Ajay Kumar Adarsh 26 August 2016
very very beautiful line of your poem which I really like from deep of my heart..... It is just a move From the blood smeared cloth To a spotless one White, bright and smooth Pouring joy and peace; you really write awesome poem Partha....... bahut hi behatareen poem........aapke poem men jabardast message hota hai Goswami g..........meri subhkamnaye aapke sath hai....ummid hai aapki agali kavita(next poem) jald hi padhne ko milegi......thanks a lot.......GOD bless you my friend.....
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Ajay Kumar Adarsh 24 August 2016
nice poem with nice message.......great! 10+++
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Great response from you, Thank you for reading the poem carefully
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Gandalf The Grey 06 August 2016
A touching contrast of fortune and the opposite
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