Sunday, March 11, 2012

Friends Comments

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Friends are like stars around moon,
They charm us every morning and noon,
Everything is shared with them,
I have choosen amongst them.
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Aditi Joshi
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Jazib Kamalvi 31 October 2017

A sublime start with a nice poem, Aditi. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thanks

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Aditi Joshi 16 March 2012

Thank you sir, For your encouragement.... I will surely correct my lines. Thank you Dave sir, I will read your poem... Yup friends are best persons in the life...

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Tarrakkul the Gazzel 11 March 2012

Oh that is a lovely, lovely poem! It is wonderful! One small tip: in your line I have choosen amongst them., choosen is actually not a word, chosen is better, or chose. Thank you so much for writing this poem :)

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Dave Walker 11 March 2012

To have good friends is the best. A great poem. May i invite you to read my new poem called, Holy Man.

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