Friendship Poem by annabelle rebong

Friendship

Rating: 5.0


i remember the first day we met
that everyday i wont forget
how you came to my life and you've shown me kindness
Im glad you came you took away may sadness

days have pass the nights are long
but through those days are friendship grew strong
i had this strange feeling for you
im hoping you feel the same way to

there came a time that i found out
about your life and what it all about
you had this sickness inside of you
and i really dont know what to do

I did my all i did my best
i keep thinking of you i have no rest
idid everything to make you happy
i wont leave you so dont you worry


I become happy when you told me
you give me reason to be happy
every reason to keep on fighting
every reason to keep on holding


please dont leave me cause you are my treasure
please stay with me now and forever
please say you need me please tell me its true
cause deep down inside me I LOVE YOU

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Annabelle Rebong 26 October 2011

thank you to ency bearis, and romeo della valle, this is my firstime to joined here in this website, im not to good to speak in english but i always trying my best for everything i do. and this is my first poem that i did here, thank you for the comments

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Ency Bearis 24 October 2011

Lovely rendition the way you open up your arms to someone, such with compassion. Heartfelt emotion and write poetically.

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Romeo Della Valle 23 October 2011

Amazing! What a beautiful, well penned and poignant write about an honest friendship! I love it for its sincerity! This excellent heart touching write has become your stepping stone that will lead you with your poetic talent straight into the Poetry World which I am very sure it is already delighted having you joined! 10+++ Keep inspiring the World with more talented works! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from Bronx, NY....

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