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Friendship

Rating: 2.5

Sitting alone in the garden
fingers playing on the keyboard
searching something in mind

Suddenly
suprise without notice
someone came across me
someone want to create a relationship
and say 'hello' to me

First, nothing to say
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It's about my story with my best friend
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Jkson Milton 01 September 2013

Can u tell me…………….Who is she……………………… She loves Red Roses She is in different Poses Looking like a Blue Butter Fly If u will see her…she will shy who is she………………. Her nature is very love full Always her face is smile full She worked as Reporter Now she is good writer …. Who is she…………… She like the bird Pigeon…. Which can fly out of region If u try to catch..it will fly away. If u like it, Pigeon will near by… who is she…………… If u don’t understand yet….. I will tell u She is my, darling Nabila.i love u

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Xelam Kan™ 30 January 2013

its indeed a fine one but get loosen in the middle lines u crafted good images with fine colors but humbly suggest to make balance while stroking every line should reinforce other so to bring a cohesive view.... for example 3rd stanza and 4th one blurring the picture...... i feel lil bit lose of controle here and no doubt last stanza is much stronger and bold.... good attempt.....

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Sun Shine 08 January 2013

simple theme. beautiful!

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Anil Kumar Panda 19 November 2012

written in a soothing style it flows so sweet.keep inking nabila

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