Splendour of a moonlit night
Lies frozen within reach.
In vacuum silence of desolate air
The mind can break its golden cage
And spread its flapping wings
The sky and stars, trees and earth
Will absorb all the steam
And bring us all within our fist.
We have a right to live everyday.
Let's open the chiller door
Make a drink and make up our mind,
Sip the beauty and spread ourselves.
That's the way to peace and heaven,
That's the way to live with self.
We all have a right to live.too true. This line is so powerful and I feel like standing up and live. So much sense, both spiritual and psychological sense in here.great to read. Mohabeer Beeharry
NICE THANK U in search of my love hope to find him ere the sunsets as he may by then be below the fathoms of the sea seeing himself bereft of me let my oarsman make haste as we have little time to waste the sun is about to set as the storm threatens too how will my lover without me do I wonder too do you MODIFY PLEASE AS PER RANJISH the sun is about to set / as the storm threatens too how will my lover / without me do / I wonder too / do you
In Search Of My Love is a poem of true love and the dilemma of lover is an eternal feeling. Nice poem full of emotion. Thank you for adoring my poem with your bright piece. Where can I read your poems? The Poet Poet ' search lead me to a sight where no poem has been posted after 2014.
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If it's a criticism and advice I thank you for being so nice If it's appreciation thank you, it's my inspiration.
This feels like it has been spoken in its purest form... Beautiful! ! !
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I can almost hear the sound of roaring tree leaves upon the persistent breeze, and the freshness of the air emanating from a land far away. A really great piece!
Thank you for sharing your feeling.