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Lovers

Rating: 4.5

When at first we met each other
We were trekking toward the peak
With first love and expectations
We trod the path, we trod the path.

Then we came to live together
And dived deep down the sea
met coral reefs and pack of sharks
And had friends-the dear dolphins.

Now we both are well read books
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Thursday, October 1, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: lovers
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 14 October 2015

waiting to be touched once again. Nice work. Thansk for sharing.

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Chinedu Dike 11 October 2015

Love is a spiritual experience, a voyage of bliss that is fraught with stumbling blocks. It needs careful nurturing at all times to maintain its blissful nature. A lovely poem, well articulated and insightfully penned with conviction. Thanks for sharing Sumit. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Dr Antony Theodore 10 October 2015

A Wonderful poem. HOw you describe the transition of life in poetic and visual terms. wonderful. gave you a 10.

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Maria Goodison 18 October 2015

I can feel what you saying nice work

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Jaya Das 04 January 2017

the last paragraph touched my heart..brilliant lines...the feel is just amazing....wonderful thank you jaya

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Sumit Ganguly 04 January 2017

Thank you for your comments on Haiku-4 an this poem.

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Abhilasha Bhatt 26 December 2016

An amazing and beautiful creation.....loved it :)

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Richard Wlodarski 28 September 2016

Beautiful how you have used nature to symbolize the various stages of love. Gave you a big 10!

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Golden Nkemdirim 22 July 2016

Wow, a beginning of something beautiful, thought met challenges along the way, but also met some good too, and at d end it was as beautiful as the beginning. Wonderful

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Halin Roche 01 May 2016

excellent poem sumit.... especially the last stanza! !

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