Frozen Time Poem by Virginia Cairns

Frozen Time

Rating: 5.0


Father time
To this being I beg
That he will freeze time

At sunset or sunrise
Crescent moon and shining stars near
With a cool autumn breeze
For my knight in shining armor and I

Just you and I unfrozen
Standing near each other
At least for a while

So we could get to know one another
Talking for hours on end
Laughing at jokes

Singing along with songs while dancing
Playing instruments
Enjoying the noises of our making

To play games
Competing in fun
Smiling while yelling

I'd wish to know you
Heart and soul
To learn everything I can about you

To share your burdens
Pain, heartaches, and all
So you won't be alone

I'd ask to rewind time
And undo mistakes and problems
So to give us a real chance

I'd try and be a true friend
Caring, loving, and always be there for you
And maybe even be more

I hope and beg to get this chance
At least I could say I tried
To do everything I could

Who knows
Hopefully fate will see it fit
That we are one day together

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Romeo Della Valle 16 December 2011

Beauty and Sweetness radiate through this well penned and poignant write. This heart touching poem clearly shows your great poetic talent! Thank you for sharing! 10+++ Keep it up! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City! ....

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Shekhar Joshi 04 September 2009

sweet poem....sweet longing.....u wrote well..... good work.....

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Ted M 28 August 2009

A wish to freeze time and for a nice cause. Nice write.........

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Steven S 26 August 2009

You know your hearts desires well... and you know what you want when it comes to sharing life in that special way... and you have talent when it come to expressing all this. Wonderful poem.

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Virginia Cairns

Virginia Cairns

Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania
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