latoya trent

Rookie (August 26th 1989 / Washington state)

Fulfilled - Poem by latoya trent

you've fulfilled me
in every way thought possible
you loved me like
no one ever would
and more than i thought
you ever would
you were there to hold me
when times got rough
and there for me when
my world seemed to tough
you saw me when i thought
i was invisable
you knew me well, it was
like i was predictable
you always knew what was wrong
and tried to make it right
and when you'd call
i'd want to talk all night
you showed me that i
could be loved
and for that i thank you
but now it's harder to deal with
and it seems like to you
i was only a myhth
every day that i call
and you wont answer the phone
is another day that i regret
choosing to be alone
i could never hate you
but my mind is telling me
that you hate me
im just hoping that, that's not true
i know you dont love me anymore
but i still love you

Listen to this poem:

Comments about Fulfilled by latoya trent

  • (6/17/2005 9:42:00 PM)

    'Sup? I like the poem very much! I hope you're open to suggestions BECAUSE here they come...hehe! SPELLING...worl(world) ...check that out! ...myhth(myth) ...ALSO...I like it better if you choose to say...'..and more than I thought you ever could.' That's a possibility? ...'...and my world seemed to(too) tough. What if you started a new stanza with...'you always knew what was wrong' i say that becasue it 'introduces' a new feeling on the subject. It's okay if you didn't BUT if you did it would make it NICE! Ditto...'everyday that i call...' perhaps a new stanza? Fulfilled IS fulfilling...yes! (Report) Reply

    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
Read all 1 comments »

Read this poem in other languages

This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.

I would like to translate this poem »

word flags

What do you think this poem is about?

Poem Submitted: Friday, June 17, 2005

Poem Edited: Thursday, April 12, 2007

Famous Poems

  1. Still I Rise
    Maya Angelou
  2. The Road Not Taken
    Robert Frost
  3. If You Forget Me
    Pablo Neruda
  4. Dreams
    Langston Hughes
  5. Annabel Lee
    Edgar Allan Poe
  6. Stopping By Woods On A Snowy Evening
    Robert Frost
  7. If
    Rudyard Kipling
  8. Do Not Stand At My Grave And Weep
    Mary Elizabeth Frye
  9. I Do Not Love You Except Because I Love You
    Pablo Neruda
  10. Television
    Roald Dahl
[Report Error]