Fully Condemned Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Fully Condemned



If you are left crest fallen
With face sullen
Cry not in open
But fully condemn

It was not pure love
That you believed
To be true
For going through

It was simple illusion
That kept you in confusion
Led to live with untruth around
The true love was never found

What made you to surrender?
When it did not appear
And made you to take decision
With no loss of time in anticipation

Fully Condemned
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 01 December 2015

The 10,421st gem! Great poem, you make it look really easy. Can't figure out why you aren't published in the big name publishing catalog. The writing world is silly like that by not noticing greatness, i suppose. 30 Nov by Peter Hamilton | Reply

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 30 November 2015

What made you to surrender? When it did not appear And made you to take decision With no loss of time in anticipation

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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