Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 390,107 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Fully Condemned - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

If you are left crest fallen
With face sullen
Cry not in open
But fully condemn

It was not pure love
That you believed
To be true
For going through

It was simple illusion
That kept you in confusion
Led to live with untruth around
The true love was never found

What made you to surrender?
When it did not appear
And made you to take decision
With no loss of time in anticipation

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/1/2015 2:17:00 AM)


    The 10,421st gem! Great poem, you make it look really easy. Can't figure out why you aren't published in the big name publishing catalog. The writing world is silly like that by not noticing greatness, i suppose.
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (11/30/2015 9:19:00 AM)


    What made you to surrender?
    When it did not appear
    And made you to take decision
    With no loss of time in anticipation
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Poem Submitted: Monday, November 30, 2015

Poem Edited: Tuesday, December 1, 2015


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