Fully Drunk Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Fully Drunk

Rating: 5.0


He entered home
Fully drunk but not welcome
He fell down on floor
I had kept open the door

It had become his habit
To come late and beat
Abuse with filthy language
And not allow us to manage

He will shout with top of voice
We were helpless and had no choice
He was digging grave for us
We had lost complete trust now

Today he passed all level of decency
Now it had increased its frequency
He may resort to all kinds of low level
We were feeling guilty and not well

Today he came with resolve
To push us off from home and misbehave
But we too had decided to offer resistance
Give him no reason or escape with chance

We slammed the door after pushing him out
He was out of control and could not shout
He was down on doorway and spoke nothing
He offered no resistance while downing

This was all we could do
He was very much part us and very true
But we had tolerance limit
He was now no more for us to be fit

We knew he may not return
Go back to his place and never to turn
He will arrange for new company
As he had liked and had link with so many

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He entered home Fully drunk but not welcome

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He entered home Fully drunk but not welcome

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sad Melissa Norton2 minutes ago very good insight, smooth reading, great story but I hope not yours.

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Fine Kanniappan Kanniappan 11 minutes ago Fine! You told the evils of drinking and drunkenness.

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Re: Fully drunk (Score: 1) by induce on Tuesday, July 16,2013 (13: 52: 28) Hi Jadia, a deep and heavy poem. It does have the strength to be published I do believe. Thank you for sharing mate. keep your writing up, always, induce... andye

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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