Funereal Poem by rinki nandy

Funereal

Rating: 5.0


Come with me o thee,
to my grave and reach,
for my ecstasy deceased,
take my eyes and see,
my ashes and feel,
gravity of my soul and preach,
kindness and passion meet,
your greatness my plea,
blind me light come walk with me,
alter me please, destroy the devil in me,
carry me angel, fly with me,
away to infinity,
discover uncharted horizons and feel,
restless in the vastness you reel,
burn me fire, melt with me,
vaporize veins, surprise me,
zero me radiance, die with me,
fade away shining star....shine in me.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Loved the metaphor used here. Poetic language of the poem, so well blended. Well done! ; D

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 01 July 2010

Poetry of intense sore and sour…rich metaphor… with passionate yearning… ‘for carry me angel, fly with me, /away to infinity, ’…’ uncharted horizons’…with ‘melt with me, ’… Deep desire to be in unique oneness with ungetable [may be] or freely getable…here poetic vacillation as finality culminated in non-existence [final exit] where in a purest state wants to be in ‘destroy the devil in me, ‘….thanks for sharing… Ms. Nivedita UK

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