Gamble Of Love Poem by Aboutaleb Toupa Esfandiari

Gamble Of Love

Rating: 4.5


Legal or illegal
You are in my heart
No matter if you be
There or soon depart
This is a real love
For you, and that is all.
Pure, and simple in which
People seldom do fall.
I'm a man about it,
I say and I mean it
Although it's a gamble
And few surely win it.

Tuesday, December 24, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Marvin Brato 27 December 2013

Loving is unpredictable and not perfect....but better to have loved and lost than not have loved at all!

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Marvin Brato 27 December 2013

Lving is unpredictable for we are only human, but better to have loved and lost than not have loved at all!

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Amirhossein Ahmadi 28 December 2013

Love is a good sense and i think loving is a chance for people... by love you can be better but sometimes this love make you depressed and bad.... and gamble of love is very nice...thank you very much.

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Baharak Barzin 27 July 2015

Simple but deep. Fearless but doubtful

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thank you very much, dear young petess compatriot. Lets make the word bow to Persia like it did in ancient times.

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?????? ????? 06 November 2021

سلام آقای اسفندیاری

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Garmon Evans 18 May 2020

load of bollocks really is

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A B Faniki 09 August 2019

A brilliant poem with the flare of originality n honesty.Thanks for such a love work. I can relate

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Ghazal Ebrahimzade 08 May 2018

fantastic and elegant pure feelings exposed through rimes

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Afrooz Jafarinoor 08 June 2016

Beautiful poem and beautiful Platonic love

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