Gasping For Existence Poem by stella dino

Gasping For Existence



gaze me in the eyes
shudder in my cold blood
lift all which conceal
and stop the time

then slowly you walk
alone in the shadows
leaving what is left of me
to enjoy the dying bliss

then you hear my call
as i loudly whisper your name
looking with your sighs
i lock myself to you
but never did you stop
as you close my eyes to enjoy our demise

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
John Ericson Millano 12 April 2010

oooh.. writer :)) continue writing stella.. hone your skills.. Ü

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Nashy Lamen 15 September 2009

Free verse... Nicely done... COntinue writing... :)

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Danzen D. 15 September 2009

Whispering..grasping...clinging..tightly...tight...gasping for breath...gasping for existence..heh heh.. A nice piece, keep writing!

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Madelene Calalo 12 September 2009

nice one.. hehe.. keep writing..

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stella dino

stella dino

baguio city, philippines
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