Cluster of stars are blinking in the sky,
I can see blue, red and gold if I lie;
Myriad of heavenly sent lotus
Haloes in creek, Just focus
In the woods - bulbuls and Orioles fly.
This makes a lovely poem. But, sorry, it is not a Limerick. The number of syllables in each line are too many. The syllables must be 9,9,5,5,9. This structure is non- negotiable for a limerick. It is, however, a good poem. Adeline
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
this is a truly fantastic poem, a fantastic write.
I'm honoured by a fantastic review on the poem ๐๐๐๐