Bhekumuzi kubheka

Rookie - 341 Points (1989 September 19 / Durban)

Generally Warned - Poem by Bhekumuzi kubheka

With a smile she said 'please don't touch me there'
With a smile she wanted more kisses and less touch.

Like a virgin enjoying her first kiss like a toddler learning to walk
Be gentle and guide her all the way.
Be kind and loving.

She said ' i need you to teach me what is a man'
She said ' they say all man are dogs, show me the wolf in you'

She was ready to be hurt by me
She was willing to cry up all night
Ready to call me a dog like all girls do but only this time.......this time i was going to be her only dog that she loves and hate at the very same time

So i generally warned her of the hearts I've broken, they never mended
If hers broke it was never going to heal.
So if hers broke it would be mine cause I gave her my heart

Topic(s) of this poem: epic

Form: Epic


Comments about Generally Warned by Bhekumuzi kubheka

  • Kelly Kurt (10/11/2015 10:58:00 AM)


    A well written poem, Bheki. Honesty and openness (Report) Reply

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  • Fabrizio Frosini (9/17/2015 7:30:00 AM)


    Ready to call me a dog like all girls do...

    mmm.. not so 'nice' to be called a dog, saying the truth.. ;)
    but as a wolf, it seems you'd been tamed.. ;) Women may appear 'frail' but they are lioness.. :)

    keep on writing, Bheki..
    Cheers
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, September 17, 2015



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