Thursday, November 3, 2011

Get Up And Ride! Comments

Rating: 5.0

I will rather fall in love and break my heart a thousand times
Than slowly die as the Grandfather clock chimes
Don't try to destroy me anymore, I've walked away
Held my head up, packed my bags and walked away!
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Joanie Tarr
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Chinedu Dike 12 August 2020

Well expressed thoughts and feelings elegantly brought forth with conviction. Beautiful poem nicely put together.

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Naida Nepascua Supnet 06 November 2011

this is a nice poem for it talks about accepting the consequences though falling inlove might bring pain

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Dave Walker 03 November 2011

A great poem. Really enjoyed reading it. A great write.

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Joanie Tarr

Joanie Tarr

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