Wednesday, November 30, 2022

Ghazal 7 Comments

Rating: 5.0

Erase these prolonged merciless marks on the moon, turn to me
The mirror of this broken window breaks the tune, turn to me

The carpet of damp lashes have decked up anklets at their ends
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Mushtaque B Barq
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Indira Renganathan 30 November 2022

Very much enjoyable with perfect syllable counts...full score

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