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Girl, Fragmented

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he was on the verge of the atlantic
where the coast is lined with small
hotels and families on vacation

when he met her: smiling girl
with sun-browned limbs and
a curious, lopsided smile

he remembers her now only
in words, adjectives, snatches
of descriptions used in retrospect
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Melissah C 09 January 2008
I love the end, it tops the whole thing off its strange how you meet some people and never see them again, how certain things stick its like a 30 second romance
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Ivan Donn Carswell 13 July 2007
Ryan, you capture fragmentation superbly in this piece; recolletions are indeed like this. Well written. Rgds, Ivan
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