Give It Time Poem by Marcquiese Burrell

Give It Time



Time heals everything
I musn't jump into a new relation just to fill my void
The time I need is to heal myself and try
to get over the hurt feelings
Right now, I'm vulnerable...
And, I'm feeling in need of attention
that kind of attention only one who
love you can give,
When you've found yourself
in a situation where it all must end...
you start to miss that feeling only that one can bring
It seems downright impossible to think of this ending as a new beginning
but, only thinking negative would put me into an unshakable mood
Life is full of beauty and it will not leave me stranded on cross-roads
what happened was meant, there's no need in blaming myself
There is a pretty strong chance I'll fall in love again
And, this time... it will be better, as.... I have already seen the worst.
I will have an idea as to how to take this new love on a road, that
doesn't lead to failure. Love is too strong of an emotion to happen only once!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Elbert Matt Loubser 25 June 2009

true and good message, entails wisdom, but lacks rythm and structure

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