Give Promise Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Give Promise



Nothing wrong in drawing
With some changes again redrawing
These are initial inputs
Those can strengthen or simply cut to size

Keep thinking on future lines
That shall be base or guide lines
You may make changes
And cautiously manage

The world is demanding more
The competition is likely to soar
You got prove the worth
Then only the support shall be coming forth

Life may be short
But always report
On your drawing able
To stretch out the struggle

It has constant appeal
You must feel
Real pulse with practice
That shall show the way or give promise

Monday, November 3, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: poem
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 03 November 2014

good daniel lee kilburn9 minutes ago good Comment +1 i like it Miss imp3rfect1on9 minutes ago nice poem, i like it alot Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 03 November 2014

great simile! Brianna Blue9 minutes ago THe words werent so attracting, but I personally loved the poem. It's so creative.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 03 November 2014

Nothing wrong in drawing With some changes again redrawing

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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