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God Forgive Me From The Sin

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as i stand under the rain
asking god to forgive me from the sin
asking god with an eye full of tears
please god forgive today
i felt that i wasnt crying alone
but they sky was crying with me today
asking god to forgive us today
as i bury my self under the pain
but today am crying so loud
please god forgive me from the sin
Gaurav Silwal 07 December 2006
A very nice and wonderful poem....Keep writing.....Gaurav
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Raghavan Warrier 07 December 2006
Very good poem. But you need to be careful about the spelling and punctuation. But the poem is an excellent one.
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