Thursday, December 18, 2014

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Rating: 4.8

She's skinny, sweet and not so short;
Walks like a model, wearing those high hilled shoes.
She looks pretty with her not so fair skin;
With her eyes so brown, that smile as she grins.
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Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan 25 December 2014

Miles make us miss each other and obliterate the bind But at the end of the unknown horizon, we will meet there, at the right time! A beautifully composed poem on some lady with different shades.Well expressed Well done Col Muhammad Khalid khan

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Chinedu Dike 25 December 2014

It's a lovely narrative poem, well articulated and nicely penned to capture the strength of Betty's character and personality. A beautiful lady indeed. Thanks for sharing and do keep it up. Please read my poem MZANSI AND THE BALLOT BOX.

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Phillip Joshua Jimenez 19 December 2014

Wow! This poem is so simple, yet so amazing. This deserves some popularity: D

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