Monday, May 11, 2009

God Knows (Song) Comments

Rating: 4.5

Blazing on by
There's nothing more that I could do
I'm sorry that
I'll never be with you again
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annie tuck
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Silence Dogood 12 May 2009

Creative lines were used. I like it alot. Though you need to establish a rhythm. Your lines are well done. And the meaning get's across to your audience.

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Adam Shipley 11 May 2009

Brilliantly written. Love the chores.

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