God May Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

God May

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“God may question” did you count days
Did you remember me in pious ways?
You had nature by your side
Air and water in form of blessings provided

Do we remember any one of single thing?
There is draw back for something
We have weak conscious to follow
Remain in confusion and draw he line

We see beautiful flower in garden
At one moment we bow head even
Trust the almighty and offer prayers
Close the eyes and honestly remember

This is one and only chance
To prove human being at once
God wants to test our feeble mind
Put some confidence of little kind

As result we rush to for prayers
Speak mind and offer
Sincere desire to ask for reprieve
With folded hands and belief

You will find many people
Who strongly stand for struggle?
Take an oath to believe in some gospel
Practice real belief and conveniently misspell bad practice

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 22 March 2014

“God may question” did you count days Did you remember me in pious ways?

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 22 March 2014

slightly jumbled message Amanda Wright3 minutes ago seeking for a spiritual message, but the need for rhyme jumbles the flow and point of the poem.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 26 March 2014

Scott Ransopher likes this. Scott Ransopher Another good poem Hasmukh! 6 hours ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 22 March 2014

:) Rhonda :) 11 minutes ago Very nicely written and something I needed to read. Thanks for sharing! :) Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 22 March 2014

nice Raghav Choure13 minutes ago god is almighty

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 22 March 2014

believe in god luis cruz4 minutes ago Very powerful words Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 22 March 2014

Interesting Caleb Bale5 minutes ago Faith is a beautiful thing. Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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