Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 686,221 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

God May - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

“God may question” did you count days
Did you remember me in pious ways?
You had nature by your side
Air and water in form of blessings provided

Do we remember any one of single thing?
There is draw back for something
We have weak conscious to follow
Remain in confusion and draw he line

We see beautiful flower in garden
At one moment we bow head even
Trust the almighty and offer prayers
Close the eyes and honestly remember

This is one and only chance
To prove human being at once
God wants to test our feeble mind
Put some confidence of little kind

As result we rush to for prayers
Speak mind and offer
Sincere desire to ask for reprieve
With folded hands and belief

You will find many people
Who strongly stand for struggle?
Take an oath to believe in some gospel
Practice real belief and conveniently misspell bad practice

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/26/2014 8:42:00 PM)

    Scott Ransopher likes this.

    Scott Ransopher Another good poem Hasmukh!
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/22/2014 10:22:00 AM)

    :)

    Rhonda :) 11 minutes ago
    Very nicely written and something I needed to read. Thanks for sharing! :)
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/22/2014 10:21:00 AM)

    nice


    Raghav Choure13 minutes ago
    god is almighty
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/22/2014 10:14:00 AM)

    believe in god

    luis cruz4 minutes ago
    Very powerful words
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/22/2014 10:13:00 AM)

    Interesting


    Caleb Bale5 minutes ago
    Faith is a beautiful thing.
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/22/2014 10:13:00 AM)

    slightly jumbled message


    Amanda Wright3 minutes ago
    seeking for a spiritual message, but the need for rhyme jumbles the flow and point of the poem.
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/22/2014 9:51:00 AM)

    “God may question” did you count days
    Did you remember me in pious ways?
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Poem Submitted: Saturday, March 22, 2014

Poem Edited: Saturday, March 22, 2014


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