God picked you out of all the rest because he knew I'd love you best.
When I get to heaven if your not there I'll write your name on the golden stair.
If your not there by judgment day I'll know you went the other way.
I'll give the angels back there wings there golden harps and everything, and just to prove my love is true I'd go to hell just for you.
This is very well written and so romantic and heartfelt. This is how a poem about love should be written. You get a 10 for this and thank you for sharing. Hugs, Barbara
'When I get to heaven if your not there I'll write your name on the golden stair.'-I LOVE this line. I added your poem to my favorites. Bravo!
that is a very awsome poem it has so much deep meaning and i love how you wrote it with true feelings....
A 12year old boy wrote this poem out by hand in 1950 and gave it to me. We were both in hospital at the time. He wrote it on a piece of foolscap paper and somehow delivered it to me. How would a 12year old know these words. That was 72 yrs ago.
dang...tis is what u call love i really was touched by this poem 35000+++++ i agree with amanda ford n iron panda 23 bout this poem =x speechless still.....
woah! ! that is true love! ! .....i love how it just flows^-^ amanda pretty much summed it up 2300++
wow i love this poem! ! ! ! ! it takes true love for a person to give up everything for the one they love
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
excellent work, outstanding gorgeous words can't describe the truth in this