Going Blind Poem by Nikita Cheney

Going Blind

Rating: 3.8


The pain is growing stronger still
It's hell-bent course is almost run
And try as I may with all my will
Won't see too many more a rising sun.

It courses through my veins
I feel all its malintent
To cause my sad untimely death
Is the path on which it is so bent
No prayer on high or mercies cry
Would stay it's cruel cold Wicked blade
For in my mind and in my soul it's Mark it has already made

So when I'm gone do not Lament
Just be glad that I am free
Finally free from blinding pain
Which all my life has tortured me

Saturday, November 24, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: depression,illness,pain,abused
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I originally wrote this about a dear friend who at the time was hopelessly addicted to black tar heroin, but later became less about my friend(who after prison is fully recovered) and instead perfectly applicable to my ex, who beat me nearly to death. But thats my favorite thing about a poem, it makes not one lick of a difference what I wrote it about, but what the reader feels as though it applies to them. Thanks for reading.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 24 November 2018

Deep feelings well expressed with clarity of thought and mind. Well conceived in good rhyme scheme with conviction. An insightful creation. Thanks for sharing Nikita.

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