Friday, October 2, 2015

Golden Silver Dust Magical Wanderlust Part Four Comments

Rating: 5.0

She's an angel, she's a star
She's even more beautiful than before
From the moment she left you
She ultimately became something new
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G J Salgado
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Daniel Brick 02 October 2015

This Part Four steps back from further narrative for an extended Ode on her character and being, and I really love the language you use throughout this praise-song of her special identity. And that identity is contrasted to another character's identity, someone in her past who has failed her (it's not clear to me yet) . The crucial passage is a prophecy: EARTH AND MOON SHALL BE ONE. EVERYTHING WILL BE AS IT SHOULD BE. That is the future union of things that will happen but how and when is unclear. She is clearly the person who represents the Moon in this union, and I suspect this mysterious other person is of the Earth. Does their reconciliation play a role in this cosmic destiny? I really love this poem for itself. You have created an awesome female somewhere between human and divine status, partaking of both realms, both mysterious and intimate to us readers.

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