Golden Silver Dust Magical Wanderlust Part Four Poem by G J Salgado

Golden Silver Dust Magical Wanderlust Part Four

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She's an angel, she's a star
She's even more beautiful than before
From the moment she left you
She ultimately became something new

Time was within her hands
Realms were seeking her beyond the lands
She awakened the galaxies that were lost
Everything had beauty, freedom, and lust

She owns the night
When she seeks her sight
She owns your soul
When you are left old
She infected your heart from the time it was young
Each word of the word of the song as it was sung
Played out in her head
You knew them all before it was said

No matter what you thought was true
She's magical, she's free and she's nothing like you

Wherever she goes next from here
She can be seen anytime and anywhere
She cannot be contained or ignored
Neither can her mortality once it's restored

Once she has left you she glitters in the sun
The dust falls, Moon and Earth shall be one
Everything will be as it should be
Only through her eyes will you see

Her life randomly gives you tokens to prove that you were there
So that you can be remembered

She's fast as the wind, she can run all night
She's taking herself further into the light

Her dreams wrap around her soul
While she wraps you around her finger
Adorned with fine gems and intricate skulls
Told a story of everything that lingers

Reminiscent of who she was during a time that no longer existed
Always being true to what would be expected

At her greatest, she was nothing that you could ever avoid
Her truth was modest but was just enough to destroy

All that is left is everything that she will ever be
Tasting the poison after she leaves
It hides itself in your bones
As she puts on her crown 
She sits on the throne
Making all things possible through what she's always known

Golden Silver Dust Magical Wanderlust Part Four
Friday, October 2, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: magic
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Daniel Brick 02 October 2015

This Part Four steps back from further narrative for an extended Ode on her character and being, and I really love the language you use throughout this praise-song of her special identity. And that identity is contrasted to another character's identity, someone in her past who has failed her (it's not clear to me yet) . The crucial passage is a prophecy: EARTH AND MOON SHALL BE ONE. EVERYTHING WILL BE AS IT SHOULD BE. That is the future union of things that will happen but how and when is unclear. She is clearly the person who represents the Moon in this union, and I suspect this mysterious other person is of the Earth. Does their reconciliation play a role in this cosmic destiny? I really love this poem for itself. You have created an awesome female somewhere between human and divine status, partaking of both realms, both mysterious and intimate to us readers.

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