The loss of a loved one
hard to bare
but even harder for her
The death, , so intensely burning her heart
heating the tears that stream down her cheeks
No one else feels
her mind can't believe
that she'll never see his smile
never hear his laugh
never feel the warmth of his arms around her
but his death only effects her
only hurts her
only tears her in half
No one else feels
Only she feels his absence
day after day after day
Because he's only dead to her
gone to her heart, eyes, hands
forever
No one else feels
you write very maturely.. this is a captivating, almost haunting poem. i wasn't expecting the end!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Once again you've written an amazing poem. You are very good at this