Tirupathi Chandrupatla

Good Feelings - Poem by Tirupathi Chandrupatla

It pains me most
When man cheats or
Physically or mentally
Hurts a fellow man.

Man's desire to expand
And cling to absolute power
Are obstacles to bringing
Peace and order in the world.

One must feel successful
When others around do so
One must work hard
To make others succeed.

Even the need for
Self defense shouldn't
Arise when man acts
Like a man should.

When one leaves the world
What'll the soul ever need?
It's only while here this moment
It matters to have good feelings.

Topic(s) of this poem: feelings

Comments about Good Feelings by Tirupathi Chandrupatla

  • Gajanan Mishra (4/18/2014 7:15:00 AM)

    matters to have good feeling, I like it, thanks. (Report) Reply

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  • Tirupathi Chandrupatla (4/17/2014 10:32:00 AM)

    Thank you poet Dan Reynolds, I have made the change as suggested. It sounds better now. (Report) Reply

  • Dan Reynolds (4/17/2014 8:26:00 AM)

    You have important grammatical mistake.
    Are obstacles to bring
    should be
    Are obstacles to bringing
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, April 17, 2014

Poem Edited: Thursday, April 17, 2014

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