Good Intentions Poem by Dakota Ellerton

Good Intentions



The impermance of salvation,
begins to bleed at the imperfect seems of dilusion.
I beg involuntarily as my body shakes and strokes.
I once believed in faith,
in a man sent to redeem mankind from it's own hands.
Foolish concoction once born from the hand of men,
as guns and weapons to steal and rape.
From once was a time that we were saved,
we perverted our future with uncertainy and good intentions.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Hans Vr 06 July 2012

We can give up the perversion but please keep the good intentions I think this is a strong poem critical of unreasonalbe dogma and rituals. Too many people, in trying to do away with the clutter throw also away the essentials. I wish more could keep spirituality and good intention alive Very thorught provoking poem.

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