Eli Unknown

Rookie - 0 Points (05/14/78 / Houston)

Good Morning - Poem by Eli Unknown

the fresh morning dew beads up on the blades of grass
i lay motionless - with only my ears to absorb the world around me
feeling as if i may take flight - high on the noise
my thoughts entwine with the birds chorus
there is a gentle breeze that washes over me
my wings begin to expand and i am soaring high
into the outer realms of my mind
the distance seems so close - i am left far behind
alone in the madness unraveling at the seams
do not wake me- if this is only a dream
the next task at hand is a willingness to understand
and the capacity to do whatever it takes to follow through
believing equals receiving and I am contagious
on the verge of outrageously motivating myself and others
to a higher level of comprehension
more than just existence
but making a difference
not just a dollar
if you feel me then Halla!
it’s short for hallelujah
rejoice in the sound of your voice
because we all know a closed mouth wont get fed
now get up and get out of bed
dust it off and take it to the head
motivation surges through every pore in me
the world is at my finertips



– and so are you


Comments about Good Morning by Eli Unknown

  • Dr.subhendu Kar (5/10/2009 11:23:00 AM)


    believing equals receiving and I am contagious
    on the verge of outrageously motivating myself and others
    to a higher level of comprehension
    more than just existence.....................wonderful yet ingenious write by the imagery, quite passionate and introspective, well don by nature,10+, thanks for sharing
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Poem Submitted: Saturday, May 9, 2009



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