Eli Unknown

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Outta My Head - Poem by Eli Unknown

if only i could find the right words to express
deep inside my soul screams distress
and in the midst of all the chaotic flow
my mind just lets go
i cant get this song outta my head
get outta my head
i cant get out of bed
the monster under there is waiting for my feet to hit the floor
and i will be his forevermore
my heart is torn
ripped to shreds
get outta my head
i lay here listening to the sound of my heart breaking
how i long fr this pain to be taken
some mistake and
if only i could get this song outta my head
god protect me from the demons inside
there is no place in this darkness to hide
so i stay in bed
afraid
to make another mistake
something has to give
I still have a life to live
when will this ache go away
so i can get outa bed today
5/23/2009
please let the sun shine
so i canrub sum on my face


Comments about Outta My Head by Eli Unknown

  • (5/24/2009 10:15:00 AM)


    once again your lovely well penned words captured my attention, you are so creative and gifted, great poem from a great poet :) (Report) Reply

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  • (5/23/2009 12:08:00 PM)


    Amazing poem........ I can relate on so many levels...
    reality hits.. when you open your eyes in the morning..
    first touch of the floor.. you start running..

    Beautiful poem! Keep Writing.
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Poem Submitted: Saturday, May 23, 2009



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