like a raging ocean filled with crashing waves
i pray to fade away
and when i close my eye
i can see forever
nothing can extinguish my fire
i seek my higher power
and scream a lil louder
shouting at the darkened sky
twinkling gleams pierce into me
and i begin to see
what was in front of me
no room for hope and faith
if you set it down
i am thrashing into the ground
rolling in nature'\s storm
something help me -keep me warm
my purple lips quiver
cold from the weather
i must keep it together
but right now
im falling apart
when you pick it up you never wanna let it go
its a part of you than now makes you whole
whole
no more emptiness
ride the wave and keep faith
than things will be great
hope is all i have left
til my last breath
let this flow over me
a new level i shall see
this test before me
is like nothing words could explain
smashing bullets into my brain
going
going
gone
insane
WOW, that was AMAZING, especially the last 4 lines, sooooooooooo deep and strong, your poem is very meaningful, suggestive and evocative, I LOVED your words, they are 'perfectly' chosen, you are the BEST, well done
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
wow another great write. i love the way you began an ended. you are very talented but you dont need me to tell you that.