Good Night... Poem by elysabeth faslund

Good Night...

Rating: 5.0


Take a bit of Time...
See your Path.
Use a bit of Sight...
Touch the Thorns.

Warm be your turnings,
In the Mists.
Warm be the memories,
Of your Dreams.

All is peaceful...
All is now right...
Dawn smiles for you,
Through every dark Night.

This Good Night
Is for you...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Roger Cornish 26 November 2007

I LOVE ALL your stuff! Its Great and illustrates to me.....a newbe, how far I could be able to travel with Poetry. You truly are an insparation! Thanks! Roger

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Alison Cassidy 28 October 2007

A mellow piece that soothes - like a lullaby. 'Touch your thorns' stood out for me. love, Allie xxxx

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Kristy Artmann 26 October 2007

you have such a gift of wording! this is wonderful! great job! ~Kristy Artmann~

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Uloia Norris Moore 15 October 2007

To touch such a thought with in a thorn Sweet thought's they be flesh never shorn

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elysabeth faslund

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Thibodaux. Louisiana
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