elysabeth faslund

Rookie (11/23/49 / Thibodaux. Louisiana)

Good Night... - Poem by elysabeth faslund

Take a bit of Time...
See your Path.
Use a bit of Sight...
Touch the Thorns.

Warm be your turnings,
In the Mists.
Warm be the memories,
Of your Dreams.

All is peaceful...
All is now right...
Dawn smiles for you,
Through every dark Night.

This Good Night
Is for you...


Comments about Good Night... by elysabeth faslund

  • (11/26/2007 1:00:00 PM)

    I LOVE ALL your stuff!
    Its Great and illustrates to me.....a newbe, how far I could be able to travel with Poetry. You truly are an insparation! Thanks!
    Roger
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  • (10/28/2007 1:01:00 AM)

    A mellow piece that soothes - like a lullaby. 'Touch your thorns' stood out for me. love, Allie xxxx (Report)Reply

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  • (10/26/2007 3:35:00 PM)

    you have such a gift of wording! this is wonderful! great job!
    ~Kristy Artmann~
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  • (10/15/2007 8:48:00 PM)

    To touch such a thought
    with in a thorn
    Sweet thought's they be
    flesh never shorn
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  • (10/15/2007 7:42:00 PM)

    '...Use a bit of Sight...
    Touch the Thorns....'
    i'll be spending my night making sure a bunch of thorny types sleep thru it.
    This was a most pleasurable read, well-paced, well-worded.
    Have a good night.
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Poem Submitted: Monday, October 15, 2007

Poem Edited: Saturday, April 16, 2011


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